Title Attraction
He stared at me.
“I don’t want to hurt your feelings, but...you’re not doing it for me anymore,” I said.
“I am what I am." He tapped his toes on the floor.
“You don’t have the lure and excitement that you once had. You're making me look bad.”
"I was enough yesterday."
“In the beginning of this relationship, you were brilliant. You said what needed to be said, but I’ve found another... with a better story.” My voice had become shrill. “You have to leave.”
“What does that even mean- with a better story?”
“Get over it, you’re a title for goodness sake and I've found a better one."
“In your mind,” Title said and stormed out.
What do blog posts, fiction, nonfiction, poetry, and songs all have in common? They normally have a title. A title should attract readers to the words you have authored and attract Internet users to your blog posts and websites. But have you given much thought on the technique of creating a good title? How is it done?
In his March 9th post, C. Patrick Schulze shares that your title should :
I would add to this, for bloggers, to list post titles that you think are clever and decide why they appeal to you as the reader. Did you want to read the post because of the title? What did it tell you about the post before you read it?
Elizabeth Spann Craig, who writes cozy mysteries and her blog posts on Mystery Writing is Murder wrote in Titles and Names that she put thought into naming her first two novels by "punning Southern sayings". But, she adds that people misspoke the titles. Her new book due out July 6, Delicious and Suspicious rhymes and is, in my opinion, a delightful title. (Read her post by clicking on Titles and Names.)
Life Along the Dousinberry is my dad's latest writing. It happens to be about the adventures of a young boy who lives near a creek called the Dousinberry. The title gives a glimpse of the story.
“I don’t want to hurt your feelings, but...you’re not doing it for me anymore,” I said.
“I am what I am." He tapped his toes on the floor.
“You don’t have the lure and excitement that you once had. You're making me look bad.”
"I was enough yesterday."
“In the beginning of this relationship, you were brilliant. You said what needed to be said, but I’ve found another... with a better story.” My voice had become shrill. “You have to leave.”
“What does that even mean- with a better story?”
“Get over it, you’re a title for goodness sake and I've found a better one."
“In your mind,” Title said and stormed out.
What do blog posts, fiction, nonfiction, poetry, and songs all have in common? They normally have a title. A title should attract readers to the words you have authored and attract Internet users to your blog posts and websites. But have you given much thought on the technique of creating a good title? How is it done?
In his March 9th post, C. Patrick Schulze shares that your title should :
- Be a clue to your plot
- Sell the story to the potential reader
- Reflect the mood and meaning of your writing "your title needs to paint a picture"
- Be easy to pronounce
- Be five or less words
I would add to this, for bloggers, to list post titles that you think are clever and decide why they appeal to you as the reader. Did you want to read the post because of the title? What did it tell you about the post before you read it?
Elizabeth Spann Craig, who writes cozy mysteries and her blog posts on Mystery Writing is Murder wrote in Titles and Names that she put thought into naming her first two novels by "punning Southern sayings". But, she adds that people misspoke the titles. Her new book due out July 6, Delicious and Suspicious rhymes and is, in my opinion, a delightful title. (Read her post by clicking on Titles and Names.)
Life Along the Dousinberry is my dad's latest writing. It happens to be about the adventures of a young boy who lives near a creek called the Dousinberry. The title gives a glimpse of the story.
The magazine that I wrote children's read aloud stories for in the 1980's kept none of the titles I wrote. Was it me or was it their policy? I don't know. What I do know is that my love affair with my current murder mystery title, When The Keepers of the House Tremble, is unhealthy. The title is way too long and really has nothing to do with my book. But, it's poetic and is... beautiful or something. No?
Sometimes as a writer you have to practice tough love and throw out the title and begin again.
How do you create the titles for your writing? Is a process?
Sometimes as a writer you have to practice tough love and throw out the title and begin again.
Comments
Mason
Thoughts in Progress
Usually I avoid readings with long titles because it is usually an indication that the author's work is wordy. (Like this comment. Sorry)
Maribeth
Giggles and Guns
I'm tweeting this post...good collection of info here!
I do love punny titles, but it can create a real problem for online book shoppers. I think it's okay for folks in brick and mortar stores.
I had my own ideas for the "Delicious and Suspicious" book's title, but Penguin rejected them and their title is much better than mine were. :)
CD
Love everyone's comments .. interesting read .. Hilary
I choose titles that work for me (as in I love them a lot) as I'm writing, figuring a publisher will make changes. And looking forward to being at that point of my career. :-)
Lesley
Cindy, I too read posts because of the writers, but I am also lured in by interesting titles.
Mason, Thanks - me too.
Maribeth, I think you are on to something. Long titles are not in. :)
Joanne, I love this "the title is the shortest synopsis writers have to create".
Elizabeth, Wellll I think Delicious and Suspicious sounds like your creation. Thanks for Tweeting my post.
Clarissa, I won't tell a soul. :) I think that's cool.
Hilary, You are someone who can blurt it out the first time and get right. Not me.
Mary, I need to think of it like naming babies, because I love naming babies and my pets.
Karen, I hope I know when the right one comes along.
Carol, I would say greats minds run together, if I had a mind.
Deb, Thank you, I thought it was poetic too, but I realized one day it relates to very little in the story.
Hi, Lesley, Long time no hear, but then you've been travelling.
And Brian, I love the title "Playing with Matches". As creative as you are I thought the title came from you. I wondered how many times the publisher has their way with the titles. Oh, I started reading it but put it down to finish The Graveyard Book. My ADD helps me get ahead of myself.
Mary
Lee
Tossing It Out
Love this post, glad I stumbled across your blog.